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I have finally managed to escape that wretched terra, Satans Daggers. I manage well on my hind pillar and I'm able to trot at a slow pace. I turn my dial to see some dirt and rocks come up behind my frame and into the spring night. Somehow I felt released from pressure, maybe it was that crowd around me, What? You haven’t seen a mare with a screwed leg? I shouted into the darkness. Of course they haven’t I seem to reassure myself. I always thought of myself the bravest, no one else was better than me, I had it A L L.

Anyone Here? my voice sharp and shallow. This place was starting to grow a tad lighter, I noticed. Dawn. I spoke under my breath, I had made it through the night without being forcebreed. ..Those stags that think they can just come up to a maiden and then take over her life, making her to birth. That is horrid.. i stop and watch as the sun comes out to kiss my bodice. ..I might not know of this since I had a love, a true one. Oh I miss him so..But my tears mean nothing to his spirit. I say the last part out loud, all most like shouting. I feel a tear roll down my cheek. I cannot go on my leg is throbbing and my balance is most uncertain. Something doesn’t feel right, I feel uncertain about this I must lay to rest. I trot quickly over to an shade giving oak, mostly they say this is the birth tree, but I lay down quickly. Fast enough to collapse in the right spot.

I awake to see the next day, I’m assuming. I look down to see a strange creature, they speak about these untold creatures. The two legged. It didn’t seem to bad, just strange. Why was it so small, and it look as if it was me. A shade of gold on it’s head, and it wore some kind of torn material. But it seemed totally harmless. I moved my muzzle towards it and it turns to me to. They reach out to me and stroke my nose, then to my forelock it brushes my cream locks. Then it stood it’s pillars shook and it fell, I stood in time to catch her by her material. I heard a sound from it. I let it go and it stayed I moved to see it’s portrait and it grabbed at my barrel. I shrieked and it back away. No, wait small two legged creature! And it came back to me, now it grew to as tall as me. And ‘her’ face got deep, her orbs were a pale color, like Clew’s. And it spoke to me. Hello laynie, I was hoping you were here. my audits caught her words. What how do you know me? I backed up and my tiara was high avoiding this monster. I know you from when I was little, remember me And she fell. But I caught her by her material and she stood again. Yes, now I do, but what and who are you? i was still listening... I am human, my kind have 2 legs. She held up a hoof and pointed something up. My finger says I have 2 legs. You have 4. She did the same thing again. I let her stroke my nape, it was so comforting. I felt no longer dark, no longer horse. I looked down to see a peach color grow up my pillar. I watched it, then I looked at the human. I...t... I felt like I was being pulled back to something....

I gasped for air, and I noticed it was a dream, a severe awkard dream. I looked up at some porclien clouds, and the sun beating down on the oak tree. I lifted my tiara to see something in the beaten path. ..I can't seem to understand my feelings right now.. I looked up again, to the heavens my invite to them to bring the rain. Empire needed rain where i once lived, once. Why should i mock my own home? I turned my dial to the west and then to the east. i should head west maybe there is another equine, too needing attention. I started walking, a gust of wind cooled my heatd frame after my dream. I was still wondering what it meant, then i saw a river bank. it must have been a fever, many equines had them lately even the wolves. anyway i rush towards the aqua and refresh my self. looking at the river i see ripples, they just keep growing towards something. ..I quite can't keep my dark personality, maybe i have an illness.. i saw something in the water that gave me a fright, but it was just a swimming fish. i calmed and closed my orbs.....

ooc:DONE. Sorry it's long, and i won't reply till monday sorry.

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« Reply #1 on Nov 23, 2006, 9:17pm »

(Post Comming soon...Not sure if from Em or Kodiak, but one of them)
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« Reply #2 on Dec 2, 2006, 9:20am »

This land that I had ventured into chilled me to the bone. I could hardly see fifteen strides ahead of me, and it was almost dawn. My irons made barely a sound as I weave through the trees. My reasoning for coming here, I still couldn’t figure out. One moment I was just resting in my own lands, about two human hours ago. I think I was feeling I was wasting my precious time just being there, so I began to innocently explore the lands a bit more, as I am still a fairly new lead—Nay, I am new to the lands. I found a peculiar cave, no doubt covered by a waterfall. Why are they always just behind them? Never out it the open, those wretched caves, and then you step within them and nothing. Just darkness. So, one thing led to another, and bam, I am out exploring between islands. I still am not sure way I ended up in this particular land, but I am.

As I trod along, I begin to think of my brother from long ago. He had betrayed our kingdom for some unknown reason. Well, it’s not exactly unknown to me, as I often stayed up with him, listening to his ventures. It seems that he had crossed the path of some vixen who caught his fancy, so they started spending a lot of time together, even though I warned him it would only lead to trouble of someone’s beliefs. All in all, It turned out to be his beliefs that were torn apart. My parents were furious when they learned of his doings, and even more so when they found that he had transformed from an angel to a devil. It is a family rule that we never speak of him, but my sister, too young to understand at the time, often wondered of him. So of course the story lived on through our chats. I remember them vividly. We would steal away to a small clearing in the willow forest and I would tell her all about Nomad. Her eyes would grow so wide in excitement. I miss her dearly, but she will be joining me soon. Hopefully.

The glorious Summer sun is now rising to the east, shedding it’s much needed light upon me. As it grew brighter and brighter, I saw more and more equines. Most were of hellish persuasion, and stood in couples or large groups. I stayed far from them, as I despise most darqs, and their bad words of angels. My audits pinned to my skull as I went further within the forest. A group of brutes sneer as I fly past. One follows me, and nips at my champagne hide. My hinds lash out in a buck as my velvets part to release a shrill battle cry. I catch him under the chin, and he gives one last nip in the air before returning to his group muttering something about lights invading. I am not invading, though. This a free land.

The trickling of water catches my attention. My thirst has been horrid for some time now, before I left God’s Prevail. I am not sure why I didn’t drink something then, but it doesn’t matter now. The river is about a quarter mile from where I am now. I pick up a gentle canter as I turn myself towards the sunrise. I reach a clearing of trees, finally, and I pick my stride up to a sprint. As I fly through the landscape, I swear I see something sparkle beside my crown. It seems to be hovering next to me. I toss my crania, and tell myself it isn’t real, but I don’t know. It looked pretty realistic from here.

The river presents itself to me now, about five strides away. The crystalline aqua draws my in faster. I slide to a halt at the bank and my boa immediately drops to meet it. Cool water touches my velvets and I take a long drink. When I come up for air, I give my bodice a thorough shaking. I turn to survey the space that now surrounds me, and about three quarters into my turn, my pools stop on a sunkissed femora. She has lowered herself to the turf, and is laying three paces from me.

‘Ello, M’lady. I be Emerald of God’s Prevail. My I be honored with your calling and dwelling?

OOC: Meep! Mine is a long one too!

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« Reply #3 on Dec 5, 2006, 9:40pm »


My gold hued bodice jumped back as if in shock, to see another. I looked and him drinking water, the ripples in the river still growing. My maw lit a smile, to complete my mood as the sun rose above me. Shining on me as it were a spotlight, I squinted my orbs and walked into the shade. I blended, but decided to stand out in the shade. I was probaly making my mind on is I shall become a light or netural, I have deserted my dark friends. As I noticed them dissapear, I seemed to dissapear. But have they noticed? Not as I can say, but by now my pillars carry me into the aqua. I stood there the flow, passing my stockings. Cooling my down, after my heat flash I had felt something different, since that dream. Like a feeling of curiousity, maybe even desire.

I decided now that I shall reply to his voice. I am Laynie, my home is a mystery. I have no more love for Darkness, but am deciding which I belong to. I finished, but I wanted to talk more, since i have been gone from Satan's Daggers I have only spoken to myself. Emerald, I have heard of that calling before. I thought it was familar. But where? I mumbled to myself. Hoepfully he could remind me, but what the heck! I didn't even recall it, it must have been a memory i have forgotton, or tried to. Just like Norman, I was his Only Love then that brat came and killed me. I hope he's happy now! Damn Him! He's the reason I broke my leg, and lost my child that he didn't even recall.

Yep that's right he got my pregnat and made it die. How can you not know how he got me prego? He pleasured me, and I pleased him. It wasn't uncommon for mates of long periods, to do that in our old land. I loved him and he Loved me? Maybe I made a mistake, how could I have not told him. Maybe he would have protected me? Something I could have done and if he finds me yet to come, I will tell him. And I WILL make him suffer the way I did, maybe it'll come to his mind why I ate more. Why I slept longer, and grew bigger. And did he? I must not remember my Long Forgotton Past.

I broke the silence with an unknown cry and I walked carefully over to emerald, I layed as my leg burned with pain. I saw as it moved straight, out in front of body. After about 3 minutes, Human Time, I stood and finallly thought of were God's Prevail was, he was a light. Now I remember how Norman also spoke of his disgraceful light brother. I can't forget of his lullaby vocals, I will never stop thsi coming back to him. He is special to me, and I was a toy to him. I look at Emerald as if he were to speak now, my eyes were open as wide as they could. My bodice looked as if were giving a glow. I moved beside him and bent my nape towards the earth and bit at the green, i fufilled my hunger as I waited.
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« Reply #4 on Dec 18, 2006, 7:54am »

I gazed upon the lady as she spoke, a little confused. So, she'd heard of me? Hm. Interesting- I didn't think I'd heard of her. But, then again, I was a lead, was I not? Words may have just gotton out, my name around. But, truly, around the darks? Something about that idea didn't seem convincing to me, so I pondered it a little more. Laynie, Laynie, Laynie.... Nope. I'd never heard of that name before... huh. For a moment, a thought flickered in my mind. Maybe Nomad? No, that couldn't be right. The thought faded as I realized it had only come up because I'd been thinking about my wretched brother only a little while ago.

Sometimes, I wondered what had become of him, just as my little sister. If he had realized that everything was wrong, that he was supposed to side with us, the lights. He had been born to light parents, with two light siblings- what had gone wrong? Ah, well. The question can't be answered now. Perhaps if and when my sister arrives alongside me, we'll track down the solution to that mystery.

I hear my brother has become quite beastly. Raping, injuries, murder... the whole nine yards. I feel bad for all of those who he has hurt- definetely. But, then again, I wish he could just give it all up, come back to us. Though it may be best for his life to end, he is my brother, and despite bitter sentiments between us, I would hope he's alright.

COming back to reality, I watch as the light-hued mare makes her way across the river, towards me. I notice the way she limps- one of her legs looks slightly swollen. Well, I'm sure there's a story behind it- one she might not like to tell. So, I won't ask about it. She is quite pretty, come to think of it- but, then again, I could admit to being a bit of a ladies' man. I think that's the human's term for it- I forget where I heard it spoken, though.

I smile, slightly, at the vix, my sympathy extending slightly. I have been quite sympathetic around everyone, lately, as my own mate has disapearred to the foaling grounds and not yet returned. I worry deeply for Cyara, and I pray the babe will be alright. I can only hope that she'll arrive back, with a son or daughter at her side. I wish I could have accompanied her, for protection, but where she had to go is off limits to brutes.

You have, have you? I pondered, thoughtfully, Hm. Well, my brother was a dark... p'raps you knew him.

Though, truly, he hoped she didn't.

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« Reply #5 on Dec 18, 2006, 10:32pm »


ooc: i'm gonna add a song i'm attached to now, it's from anastasia i watched it when i was younger but then i just found it and decided to watch it. now i'm in trouble. lol.

dancing bears, painted Wings things I almost remeber and a song someone sings once apon a december


hmmm. Well it depends on his brother's name, back home I was very social here. Well let's say that has gone down for me, well until I met emerald. A nice light i must say, not covering for shelter from a dark. Those halo bearing equines look at us as if we had warts on our bodice. I don't most of us dark ladies are true beauties and depend on that to make our life.

someone holds me safe and warm horses prance through a silver storm figures dancing gracefully across my memories


i spoke up, for once. like as if i was getting shy even though i have been here with him for awhile. then i notice something on his mind, maybe he was wondering about my leg. i'll just tell him so he doesn't have to ask. what is his name? maybe i do, it depends. His brother? that would be intresting, and yet every time i look at this light i think of norman. he was my love and yet i know he wasn't. but back to the leg i'll tell him soon i just want to know his brother's name.

glowing as dim as an ember things my heart used to know things my heart yearns to remember and a song someone sings once apon a december


now i shall tell him or get stuck on another thought whatever works for me. i snicker for no reason he knows of but then i open my maw and began to let my voals talk. Long story short. My ex-lover basically kicked me out after 7 long seasons together. Not only that he killed our child. that ruthless stag! and all for another fae. if i ever see him again. i swear. i stopped myself before i got any further. then I layed down my leg swelling then healing itself, it's been doing that for a few days. but then again that last time the pain stung more than ever.

someone holds me safe and warm horses prance through a silver storm figures dancing gracefully across my memories


well i will stop now and let him talk. i feel so self centered sometimes when i talk alot. so ya, i'm gonna stop. i think that my name means talkative. Laynie. I wonder what it really means. maybe i can listen to myself another time, but then again i should listen to emerald.

and someone sings to me once apon a december

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« Reply #6 on Dec 18, 2006, 11:28pm »

-claps- I am appalled... in a good way. This is intresting and is leaving me on the edge of my seat. award you!!!!!
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« Reply #7 on Dec 20, 2006, 7:37pm »

((This is the OLD emerald, but I have to comment! Double Kudos to the New Emerald for mentioning his brother! Way to do the homework! *Claps*))
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« Reply #8 on Dec 20, 2006, 7:44pm »

It's funny, thinking of Laynie as a dark. I'm not trying to sound stereotypical, but she isn't like most darks- she doesn't despise any sight of a light, and she doesn't seem incredibly evil. I won't try to talk her out of her own alliance, but she mentioned before that she was considering converting. Maybe, if she did, I could offer her a home? My herd has a few nice vix, but it is still rather small. I need to gather a few more, as I have been.

SO, she thinks she may know my brother. I part my lips in speech, but the mare rises to all fours, launching into a breif tale. patiently, I await my turn to speak, mahogany pools spotted with sympathy. I have always wondered about the lives of darks. Once again I do not mean to be stereotypical, but most dark stags seem rather disrespectful of vix. Sure, I have raped a few, I will admit. But, I don't go out on the sort of raping sprees they seem to, and I don't plan to kill or harm them for pleasure. It must be a hard life for the dark minx- except for the sluts, I suppose. I tilt my crown slightly as I listen, my smile fading into a concerned and thoughtful frown. Her story is harsh, her past sad. Probably sadder than my own.

I think back remembering my own childhood. No, it wasn't too horrible. The one thing I may regret is mounting the daughter of a slave- it scarred her forever, and she never once spoke to me again. I was a little in love with that filly- but, no matter. I have Cyara, now, and she is my true love, she is everything I could ever ask for.

Coming back to the present, I shake my crown, slightly, a little sad for Laynie. She has undergone so much treachery. Still frowning, I desperately hope for his, hers, and my sake that the one who caused her grief was not my own kin.

His name was Nomad, I mutter, quietly.

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« Reply #9 on Dec 20, 2006, 7:45pm »

ooc// Oh, thankies, Em! :D... Just making sure I play the part right.
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Just let it die
With no goodbyes
Details don't matter
We both paid the price
Tears in my eyes
You know sometimes
It'd be like that baby


I looked at him, Nomad. Hmmm. I think, only close to the name Norman. But that's only what he told me to call him. The others always called him something else. I...Don't....Think....It...Could...Be.

Now everytime I see you
I pretend I'm fine
When I wanna reach out to you
But I turn and I walk and I let it ride Baby I must confess
We were bigger than anything
Remember us at our best
And don't forget about


Emerald, my memory is not something I wan't to toy with. But I can recall that the name is sort of Familar to me. I see that you don't like your brother? my tone sort of mean, and now after that paragraph. I feel a change but I don't know what. I feel a sensational feeling in me. It's tingling, but i stay calm. Not letting my expression change. I feel as if I want to change, but I don't want to see what will happen. I lift my head to the heavens and see the ball of fire dissaper and Lady Luna shine.

Late nights, playin' in the dark
And wakin' up inside my arms Boy, you'll always be in my heart and I can see it in your eyes You still want it So don't forget about us


It stops and I feel new, no one knows that I have cross-over to the lights and soon if i get the guts to I'll ask emerald if he can show me his home. But right now I feel ill and I see to it that my legs can be stable enough for me to go on journeys. I look at Emerald, and a smile fills my maw. Someone can change an entire empire, and someone can change a life. That didn't make any sense, but I think it did. In a sort of way.

I'm just speaking from experience
Nothing can compare to your first true love So I hope this will remind you When it's for real, it's forever
So don't forget about us


I seem to speak now, but it's sort of mixed up. Em, I home want see to, with lights the. I stop and my cheaks turn bright red. I speak again, this time more proper. Em, sorry, but I was wondering if i could go...you know to....God's Prevail? I stopped and I thought, this seems as if I was dreaming. You can't change alliances. And if the Herd memebers saw me in the lights lands, they for sure will make me misarable. But....I can't change it. Something I can't seem to rid of. I give up after a few trys, and it seems impossible. I turn my attention to Em and smile.

There's only one me and you
And how we used to shine
No matter what you go through
We are one, that's a fact
That you can't deny
So baby we just can't let
The fire pass us by
Forever we'd both regret
So don't forget about


As if nothing Happened.



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I finished, and i know it's crappeh
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« Reply #12 on Dec 31, 2006, 4:04pm »

ooc// I figure we should probably wait until the new site gets posted to continue this. I'll re-claim God's Prevail as quickly as possible... Can we start again there?

bic//

A concerned look across my maw, I await her response, hoping that my own brother was not the one to commit all of these horrid crimes. I heaved a sigh, releasing my breath as the vix speaks. To my relief, t'was not Nomad, though she does recognize his calling. Hm. Could he have known her? Likely. I am sure that he spread himself around, pretty well, with all of the things he's certainly done.

Well, he was my brother. I disliked him, but if he were ever to change...

My own words launch me into a state of deep thought, once more. What if Nomad were to return to me? Return to is family and return to the side of the lights? I would gladly forgive him. I remember, long, long ago, we had been friends, playmates, despite the darker nature he'd always had about him. I remember, while I was very frisky myself, he was frisker- intentionally slaughtering insects and scaring away small mamals. It hurts, just to think that these simple, little sins, done simply for fun, lead up to those bigger ones. I wonder if he'd be different, had I stopped him. If, had I just stepped in and stood up for nature, he'd still be at my side, today. If my dear brother was ever to come back to our side, to ask forgiveness, to return to being saintly and good, then I would welcome him. Welcome him onto my lands, into my home with open arms. He would be my friend, again. But, then again, it is unlikely that these things wil ever happen.

I gaze upon Laynie, as she speaks once more. She seems to be having a bit of trouble getting her point across. I smile, slightly, watching her patiently emit her words.

Ah, so she was coming around. I wonder, with the smallest of hopes, whether my own brother will ever come to senses and do the same. Only time will tell, and with a smile, and a bob of my crown, I part my lips in speech.

Of course, Laynie. You are welcome there.

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