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 Wake me up...
« Thread Started on Dec 17, 2006, 9:51pm »

Wake Me Up

I swayed back and forth, almost drunken by the bitter winds. Stumbling along my small hooves are slipping now. If only they would finally crash, Oh, how I wish I could die right here. I only want to let all the pain go, let it all slip with me. I am struggling now, why? do not know. Images keep flashing through my head, of that horribnly night everyone dissapeared.

Wake Me Up Inside

I keep falling, slipping into the abyss. My beautiful red coat has turned a musht, sloppy brown. My eyes sting, and I call for my loved ones. As I reach the bottom of the hill, I see him.

Father?

He neighs to me. How could it be? I am swift now, cascading down the mountain at full speed. I long to feel his warmth again. To feel his strong heart beating. Just as I am about to hug him, his body dissapeared. My own body goes crashing into the bushes, and the rain starts to fall. I hold my head up, trying to endure the pain as my body can't stop.

Can't Wake Up

I finally stop, and lay ther, soaked in mud, and blood. I cry now, the soft tears making rd streaks on the black mud. I pillars lift, trying to stand. A pain rips through me, like I have never felt. I scream, and bite me lip. Only God knows what will happen now.

Wake Me From This NightmareI've Become.


((Mares or stallions can come. I know she is a foal, but I want edot post her someehwer else))
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« Reply #1 on Dec 17, 2006, 10:12pm »



i walked into the foal adoption, maybe roman will want a sister of someone elses blood. he seems so dreamy lately, i mean and i am to. Escpesially knowing that hawk is better and sheridon is gone. why did he leave, he knew i was here. he knew i was pregnant with his foal. i fell over and tears streamed down my facade. roman came by my side and nuged me, he whinned and pushed at me and i felt still. as if death were coming, but i over comed it and i stood. roman nuzzled me, gladly that i haven't given up. then roman ran, and i stayed by him, not letting him run after my careless thoughts to myself. he is going to grow up strong and freewilled. then we halted to see a young filly standing there. i spoke to the young one. Hello there, I am Rayne and this is my son-- I was cut off by roman. And I am Roman I smiled at the young colt finding an intrest in life. I thought for awhile, could i take another? Of course i can if zephyr can then i shall, not envy has decided this but my love for another.
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« Reply #2 on Dec 17, 2006, 11:03pm »

I'm just a normal girl that sank when I fell overboard

I turned, panting as my pistons swiveled, and I tried to get up. My blood stained coat was moving rapidly as I tried to asses the situation. They looked normal, OK breath. Come on girl, cool it. I watch closely, surprised as she spoke. I readied myself to be beaten, like they had done to me. Wait, what was this, they did not? My lips parted attempting to speak, but alas, they would not let the words come.

Now floating up and down I spin colliding into sound like whales beneath me sinking down

My head shakes, not that I told it to. Now calm. Well, maybe a little more calm, I watch them closer. The colt.. the col seems much to eager, don't you think. Maybe he is one of them, maybe they are all tricking me! Oh, hell, not again! I back away slowly, and try to hide behind a tree. How could they, not again.. never. Daddy? Where are you? Why did they come for me too? My eyes water, and I bite my lip, holding back the tears. My small body is shaking, for I am confused. If they wanted me, why hadn't they come earlier? I was there when they took Belle, and Mother.. so why not then.

Where is the coast guard I keep looking each direction for a spotlight give me something I need something for protection


Wait, hold that thought for a moment. I peer out from the tree. They are still standing there, the same Innocent look. Duh, how could I be so stupid!! They are lights, and I am safe. Still, to be safe, I think I will stay here. That colt looks mean enough. Wait, is it a trick, have they fooled me once more? My breathing has grown harsh again, and my ivories clack together. Boy, it is getting chilly out.... Snap out of it! You could have potential danger here, Ginger! OK, now I am staying here, you never really know... Do you? My breathing is the same, raspy tone, and I am blessed with the warmth of light. But still....

How can I keep up this breathing?
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« Reply #3 on Dec 17, 2006, 11:24pm »

Ooc|Ginger.. I must say, your charrie is well.. very different. But I love her! tteehee. Nice style in writing.
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« Reply #4 on Dec 18, 2006, 9:49pm »



I looked at the filly and sighed. She just wasn't gonna speak to me. First off maybe we didn't clear things up. Roman back off the young one, i know that you want to meet new people but giver her a chance. then i took a breath trying to lower my voice to make myself sound not shy. Deary I am a light and I reside in Angel's Wings. It is a large herd with many foals. I looked at her, then I stepped towards her. Slowly i moved my muzzle to her mini nape, letting her know I'm not going to hurt her. I saw roman watching me very closey. He stood still and behind me as I tried to comfort the young kin, maybe she will get up and tell me something. I stepped back, letting her have the room needed to think over her desicion. Maybe after this we'll go to Hollow Tree Sea and rest a bit. I know roman would love the sea, maybe will see someone intresting. Maybe i'll find sheridon, maybe someone knew. I looked back at roman and saw him layed down bitting his rump. I know those pesky bloodsuckers bother all of us. By now it has gone silent and I have grown bored of waiting. But still letting this freightful filla out of my sight will scare me of what might happen if she runs into the dark lands. Once more I smile setting my good first impression.
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I have blood of arabians
I have seen 7 summers
I am the tint of Bay
I am the gender of mare
I've born Roman
I am a part of Angel's Wings
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« Reply #5 on Dec 19, 2006, 11:07am »

I'm sinking to the bottom of my... everything that freaks me out

I nod as she says she is a light. A bit relives, I begin to step forward. Suddenly, I feel a maw on my nape, and I squeal, turning and galloping back to my original position. She might be a light, but who touches a horse they don't even know? I sure as hell don't. My legs keep shaking, and I think of making a break for it. But, maybe I should give the mare a chance. After all, she was only trying to comfort me. But no one can.

The light house beam has just run out. I'm cold as cold as cold can be... be...

I walk forward now, and stand tall, being a brave little girl, that's what mom and dad always said to me. I cough, and warm up my throat.

Hi. I pause for a moment, what next? Oh...right. I'm Ginger.

Yep, that seems like a proper greeting to me. Well, I would shake her hand, but.. she doesn't have one, and neither do I. Anyway, Now I;m not sure what to do. I look deep into her eyes, Trying to show her that I am no longer afraid. Soon though, my eyes drop. I stare into the abyss, wanting my real mommy to come and hug me. And tell me that she loved me, and that dad did too. That they would always be here for me.

I wanna swim away but don't know How.... sometimes I feel just like I'm falling in the ocean...


((Thanks!! She is wierd, but it makes it easier to reply, because you can dart around anywhere, and its more fun!))
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